In the depths of the untouched their lived a Gentoo Penguin named Pengu and a Colossal Squid known by the name Gigo. Pengu was the shortest of his kind, he was in a gang with his other friends or ‘bros.’ He lived in a igloo as small as a toilet stand which he and his ‘bros’ built, It was known as the meeting house. Gigo considered himself as a lone wolf and has three missing tentacles after a fight with a Sperm Whale, Mckoy. In the Australian Antarctic Territory, a chase between Gigo and his rival Mckoy the Sperm Whale changes both of their lives.
“I’m too fast for you Mckoy!” Gigo continues to taunt.
“One bite and you’re finished!” Mckoy was as determined as ever.
Gigo swam faster and faster and then swam into something very hard.
“Ouch!” screamed Gigo.
As Gigo turned around he saw ice caving in to the sea area that he was in. Mckoy fled away from the scene as Gigo floated around. A huge igloo came crushing down into the water. Gigo floated up to the surface and saw a short Pengu standing in shock.
“NOOOOO!” yelled Pengu.
“MY CRIB IS DESTROYED!” He continued to yell.
Gigo told Pengu that it was an accident.
Pengu said “If you help me find a new crib I will give you all the fish that I have in this area.”
Gigo agreed with pengu. Then They introduced themselves to each other. After Pengu said farewell to his ‘bros’ he and Gigo were off on their adventure. While they were house shopping they stopped for a snack. They got out a piece of fish each and then took a bite.
Suddenly...
A massive growl occurred. Pengu and Gigo were shocked. Out of nowhere a massive Mckoy showed up.
Mckoy shouted out “DOUBLE FEAST FOR THE BEAST!”
Gigo swam away along the cold water with Mckoy on his tail. While they were swimming pengu heard his bros shout out
“OVER HERE!”
Gigo swam towards the voices and then heard a loud
THUMP!
Behind them there Mckoy was, trapped between two sharp pieces of Ice with penguins diving on top of him.
Pengu yelled out “Later bros!”
They replied back “Safe trips.”
As Gigo and Pengu carried on with their mission.
While Gigo and Pengu where swimming they saw a massive as igloo on the side of the ice.
“Wooooh” they both said as they passed by.
They pulled over to take a closer look. The Igloo was sharp and pointy to protect it from strangers and it had a little entrance that only a penguin could slide under. there was a hole in the ice so that Gigo can poke his head out of it. They had found the perfect house for Pengu and his bros to live in. Pengu was checking out the inside of the house and then the bros came. They all were checking out Pengus crib and complimented it a lot. After all of that Pengu and the bros were doing well. They had a good house and a beautiful area around it with lots of fish to hunt. Pengu went outside to visit Gigo but their was nothing there but a note left in the ice. I said.
Dear Pengu,
I am writing you this letter to Inform you that I am leaving to continue my journey as a lone wolf.
I hope you and you bros enjoy living in your new house.
I will never forget you. From Gigo
PS, Thanks for the fish.
Pengu felt devastated for a second. Then he looked back and saw his bros dancing and playing with joy.
“Thank you gigo” said pengu.
“Thank you.”
The end
or is it...
1 comment:
I like how you both you included dialogue in your story to give the reader more information of the setting, events and characters. The appropriate conversation between the characters help to build and maintain the climax and pace of your story which made your story very interesting and engaging to read.
Well done for using the TOPS framework to guide you during the process of this piece of writing.
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